On Sun, 16 Mar 2003 21:18:34 +0930, Pen^3 <Pen3@pen3.cjb.net.AQ>
wrote:

>I was wondering why you wrote this?  What is your goal for the story?
>It isn't a lemon in the way I normally think of them, which is like
>sex for sex's sake.  You seem to be focusing on Rei's feelings
>following the graphic rape, but in other ways glossing over it.  I
>feels a bit unfocused.

As Rei herself is at present...

My aim for the story? I'm not entirely sure myself, beyond wanting to
explore Rei's infatuation with Gendo...
-- 
Reverend David "PPV" Hawthorne - 

I wish that I could turn back time,
'cos now the guilt is all mine.
Can't live without
the trust from those you love.
I know we can't forget the past
you can't forget love & pride,
because of that, it's killing me inside.

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