Psaiyan Prince Vegeta <ppvegeta@hotmail.communism> squawked:
> On Sat, 15 Mar 2003 19:51:06 +0930, Pen^3 <Pen3@pen3.cjb.net.AQ>
> wrote:
> >Do you realise there is already a fanfic called "Eva: Fallen Angel"
> >by Mekat?
> 
> No, I didn't. 
> 
> I am considering changing the title anyway, as I have been informed of
> another fic, with a similar premise to mine with the title "To Make an
> Angel Fall". It's just a question of finding something relevant and/or
> good.
> 
> Anyhow, did you like it?

It was interesting.  Most of the writing style is very good, but there
are a few sentences that are a bit out of place.  The topic is not for
everyone.

I was wondering why you wrote this?  What is your goal for the story?
It isn't a lemon in the way I normally think of them, which is like
sex for sex's sake.  You seem to be focusing on Rei's feelings
following the graphic rape, but in other ways glossing over it.  I
feels a bit unfocused.


P^3
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