nickay420 wrote:

>hi, i just transcribed rei's poem. i was wondering if someone here could
>check my work for errors (i used the english dubbed version)
>

Everything looks right, although I don't speak Japanese and I'm going 
from the English sub... and I don't have time right now to actually go 
through it.  Still, it looks very accurate.

>Commander Ikari.
>

I believe this is actually a question... "Commander Ikari?"

>I am a vessel for my father's soul.
>

I don't remember any mention of a father... I remember something more 
along the lines of "I am a vessel for my soul."

>Doctor Ikagi.
>

This is "Akagi."

Besides that, it looks good.

Richard