Gentle fj.fleamarket.books.comp reader,

First, my apology for cross-posting to this NG. Be assured that this is 
a one-off. It will never happen again.

My sole purpose is to draw your attention to what I believe are dubious 
practices by Amazon.co.uk. I also believe that at stake here is freedom 
of expression.

Amazon have rejected my reader review of a novel by John McGahern. In 
the UK and Ireland it was published under the title, "That They May 
Face The Rising Sun". In the USA and elsewhere it's entitled simply 
"The Lake".

You may have read it. You may even have thoroughly enjoyed it.

That is not the issue. The issue is that Amazon refuse to publish my 
review. First, they ignored it. When it failed to appear, they fed me 
the excuse of their moderators being too busy to read it. Next they 
insisted (three times) that it did not comply with their review 
guidelines.

I copied their guidelines to my Amazon correspondent and asked her to 
specify the guidelines with which my review did not comply. She replied 
that she could not be specific.

When I threatened to expose Amazon on the net, they relented, and said 
that my review broke two of their rules. (It did not.) But I amended 
it, and you can read it below. You'll see that, although it's critical, 
there are other reviews on Amazon.co.uk that are far more critical than 
mine.

So what's going on? Have they done a deal with McGahern's publisher? It 
would not surprise me; the book trade has became increasingly corrupt. 
Why do you think that only a small number of books get reviewed in the 
papers — and that they're the same books in each paper? Because they're 
the best books at that moment? Think again.

Read the actual READER reviews on Amazon and see how they compare with 
the newspaper reviews. You will read lines like: "I bought this book 
because I believed all the hype. I was very disappointed."

We are being conned.

Anyhow, I dutifully submitted the amended review, with the assurance 
that it would appear within 5 days. It did not.

The astute reader will understand that this could continue ad nauseam, 
with Amazon trying to wear me down so much that I would give up and 
forget it.

I won't. Free speech and free expression are at issue here. Amazon now 
control something like 80% of book sales worldwide. They have killed 
the small bookseller. Soon the medium-sized book store will follow, and 
Amazon will have a monopoly.

At that point they can do anything they please. Try posting a very 
critical book review then!

Sincerely, and my apologies again for the cross-posting!

Margaret Shiels

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[The review Amazon didn't want you to see:]

When MIGHT is right.

In his Second Epistle to the Thessalonians, the apostle Paul wrote of 
"those who are being lost, because they didn't receive the love of the 
truth, that they might be saved. (2:10)"

What a shame that John McGahern didn't read his Scripture with a little 
more diligence; had he done so, he might not have botched the grammar 
in the very title of his book, and might instead have called it: "That 
They MIGHT Face the Rising Sun". If the poor English had ended there 
then all might have been well. As it is, when one gets past the title 
page, it's all downhill.

The novel provides clear evidence that, once a writer's book is 
denounced by the Catholic Church, all subsequent work will be praised 
as literature. We need only think of the frightful Edna O'Brien....

And literature is what this book clearly is not, at least not when it's 
read objectively, without the baggage of the encomia that have attached 
themselves to McGahern over the years, like limpets on a whale's 
buttocks.

It's terrible. I could not get beyond page 36. I tried; I genuinely 
did. The lacklustre prose is indistinguishable from that of Alice 
Taylor – in fact Taylor's outdoes McGahern's quite often. There is a 
myth, no doubt put about by McGahern himself, that he overwrites 
excessively, then prunes remorselessly. If that's the case, then the 
out-takes of "TTMFTRS" must have been excruciatingly bad.

He has no style, plain and simple – indeed I'd have preferred "plain 
and simple" rather than McGahern's weak and often cringe-making 
attempts at style. The English language seems foreign to him. It's 
English for Beginners, the vocabulary of the semi-educated. And one 
would think, to read McGahern, that Peter Mark Roget had never drawn 
breath. "Sure why use synonyms," he must reason, "when the one verb can 
be made to serve every situation?" Everybody "walks" for example; no 
sauntering, hastening, loping, striding or what have you. Clich$(D??(Bs 
proliferate, and inept ones at that: a bird drops "like a stone" (the 
only time I ever saw a bird dropping like a stone was when my husband 
let fall a frozen chicken in the supermarket).

All the characters speak with the same, dull, interchangeable voice. 
Nor does the dialogue always ring true; at one point, for example, a 
country person speaks the line, "None of us believes and we go", a 
usage I've never encountered in rural Leitrim.

McGahern cannot write characters that engage me. Because all speak with 
the same voice, it was difficult to choose between them, and as a 
result, no one character held my attention.

His narrative is even worse than his dialogue: "His eyes glittered on 
the pot as he waited, willing them to a boil." Classic Alice Taylor, 
that. I flipped through the pages and chose passages at random. There 
were no fine words or interesting turns of phrase that merited a 
mention. In fact, all I found was mediocre writing, hardly better than 
anything a schoolchild could write. And the syntax! Even that infamous 
torturer of English syntax Anita Desai could do no worse than: "The 
Shah rolled round the lake with the sheepdog in the front seat of the 
car every Sunday and stayed until he was given his tea at six."

The dust jacket quotes the Observer; evidently it hailed McGahern as 
"Ireland's greatest living novelist". Whoever wrote that should hang 
his/her head in shame, and apologize at once to ... well, to everybody 
really; such poor writing as this does Ireland no favours.

If I am wrong, and there truly is a great novel lurking between the 
covers of this book, then why on earth bury it beneath such dreadful 
prose? I honestly tried to allow this novel to grip me, but it failed 
dismally. Should I have persevered simply because it was written by 
"the finest Irish writer now working in prose"? The hell I should! Two 
out of ten, and that's being generous.